QQ's about my essay; any takers?

College Essays
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<p>Yo yo, so I've written my essay for the Common App and I'm really insecure so I need people to review my essay. Can anybody help me pl0x????</p>

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<p>bbbbbbbbbbummmmmmmmmmp will read yours if you read mines</p>

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<p>Is there no one willing?</p>