DECISION: ACCEPTED (FINALIST)
**Objective: **
• SAT I (breakdown):
800 M / 740 R / 700 W
800 M / 730 R / 720 W
• ACT: none
• SAT II:
720 Biology E
800 Math II
780 Physics
• Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0):
4.82 UW, 4.49 W
• Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable):
neither is revealed by school
• AP (place score in parenthesis):
10th grade: Computer Science A (5)
11th grade: Calc BC (5), Psychology (5), Language and Composition (5), US History (4)
12th grade: US Government and Politics, Spanish Language and Culture, Statistics, Literature and Composition
• IB (place score in parenthesis):
none offered at school, none taken
• Senior Year Course Load:
Multivariable Calculus
AP Statistics
AP Spanish
AP US Gov
AP Lit and Comp
Honors Organic Chemistry
• Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.):
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National Semi-Finalist in Moody’s Mega Math Competition (math research paper writing competition)
National Merit Commended Scholar
NJMTA 10 Year Piano Award
Scholastic Art and Writing - Regional Gold/Silver/Honorable Mention
AP Scholar with Distinction
Subjective:
• Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis) AND Volunteer/Community Service (they had six spots)
Yearbook Club (Editor in Chief), 4 years
Literary Magazine (Editor in Chief), 4 years
Newspaper Club (Editor in Chief), 4 years
Math team (member), 4 years, among top 10, compete in regional competitions
Piano, 11 years, compete in regional/state competitions, 10 year award from NJMTA, blah blah
Assistant Teacher at local Korean School since eighth grade
For the little blurb about which EC I spent the most time on, I talked about yearbook and how the yearbook office is basically my home now and that I love doing hands-on things to create a final, tangible product. (Hence my heavy involvement in publication clubs.)
Also, in the short answers, I tried my best to convey my passion for learning and writing!
• Job/Work Experience:
none
• Essays (rating 1-10, details):
Biographical essay: 6/10
I talked about how my parents are immigrants to this country and that I have seen first-hand how difficult it is to live in a foreign country. Included about how I help translate things for them (especially my mother) when they have trouble reading things in English, etc. Added a motif about their journey here being a relay race, where they start off holding a baton and that they have now handed it to me, and it is up to me to finish the race for them… typical, tbh. I spent so much more time on my Common App essays which are so much better q.q
Essay #2: If you could change a thing about your community, what would it be and why? 7/10
I talked about how the attitude towards education is rotting because everyone dives for grades and numbers and never actually try to appreciate what they’re learning. I think it reflected well my own personality/attitude towards learning because I love all kinds of learning and it annoys me to no end when people take things for granted or just talk about grades, grades, grades all of the time (i.e. 90% of my school lol).
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
• Teacher Rec #1: 8.5/10, my AP Lang teacher, who is also the lit mag club adviser! I think she likes me but it’s kind of hard to tell lol. She’s a nice person so it was probably decent.
• Teacher Rec #2: 7/10, my AP Compsci teacher. Also the math team coach and the computer science league coach (didn’t mention computer science league in the QB application though). He’s known me for a while but he’s brutally honest sometimes. I think he wrote a decent/regular-ish essay though.
• Counselor Rec: 8.5/10, she’s such a nice person and I talked to her a lot about how passionate I am about creating things and about my publication clubs, etc. Also she knows how I struggled through high school, so… yeah.
• Additional Rec: none
Other
•State (if domestic applicant): NJ
•Country (if international applicant): –
• School Type: public high school in a suburban town
• Ethnicity: Asian (Korean)
• Gender: Female
• Income Bracket: Around 40k
• Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): –
(first generation immigrant?? lol)
Reflection
• Strengths: i honestly have no idea because i was 99% sure i wouldn’t get in
oh actually on second thought my passion for my three clubs (newspaper, lit mag, and yearbook). they’re literally my babies lol
also maybe my short answers??
• Weaknesses: my SAT scores, my GPA, lol… everything…else…
• Why you think you were selected/rejected: /THROWS HANDS UP/ IF ONLY I KNEW
Colleges ranked: i didn’t do college match. i chose regular decision because i want to ED to cornell. /sighs/
General Comments:
I also added in the Additional Information section a paragraph about my medical struggles and how it took a toll on my mental/physical health and ability to study. And also about how my family struggled to cope with it. Don’t want to go into details about it but yeah, I was pretty depressed in sophomore year as well… although I didn’t say that explicitly.
Good luck to everyone, congrats to finalists, and I believe everyone will do amazingly in their lives no matter what the college or the result!! I hope this helps some people out there.