Question about Drexel VIP essay

<p>Should I write about myself, my family, my passions, etc. while just getting to the point?
"I was born..." "My mom is..." "I've written and performed my own speeches..." "I've been in..."???</p>

<p>Yes, you can write it in first person. Try not using too much repetition, if you structure your sentences differently you won’t have to keep writing: I love dogs… I love rock… I jumped… etc. Try instead: Dogs are my favorite pet… You can also say things which can be inferred that <code>you like dogs</code>, like: dogs are awesome. </p>

<p>Btw, don’t use the dogs example it is really bad lol but I am sure you already knew that. Good luck!</p>