question about the short activity essay

College Essays
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<p>what are you trying to achieve in the short activity essay? are you trying to just describe an EC (what what you did and stuff) or are you trying to show how that EC/job changes you?</p>

<p>so what you trying to write about an activity that showcase one of your qualities or write about an activity that creates a new quality?</p>

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<p>like i’m choosing between 2 short essays i wrote. One is about what i did in a club i founded. THe other is what how my job changes my perspective. Which one is better?</p>