Question About UC Essay

College Essays
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<p>UC Prompt # 1: Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

<p>Would it work if i mentioned my older brother's heart condition and how that has made me want to help others?</p>

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<p>bump...............</p>

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<p>Yeah, it most definitely works, although it may be a bit cliche.</p>