quick...an EDers please critique my poem!

<p>please? 10 char</p>

<p>sure, i’ll read it!</p>

<p>sure ill read it too</p>

<p>Not an EDer but here if you really need someone to look at it. Don’t intend on stealing your stuff though, dw.</p>

<p>I don’t mean to steal your thread, but I don’t want to add another “critique my poem” thread. Will anyone critique mine as well?</p>

<p>Refer to post above yours, although I am no literature/ poem expert.</p>

<p>i was accepted ed, ill read both of them</p>

<p>I’ll read.</p>

<p>ill read it</p>