quick common app readers?

College Essays
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<p>So. Good story- today my parents found a deeply personal essay I had given up a while ago in my room. I was totally embarrassed because it talks about my family, but surprisingly they liked it. I'm still not sure though - I need general critique about the topic material and my handling of it, and thought it's very true I'm worried it shows none of my good qualities and only my bad. Its also kinda anticlimactic, but then again all of my essays are. Any takers?
<333 (Applying ED so would love it if you could read and respond in only a day or two.)</p>

<p>Oh, it's also 41 words over the 500 limit :(</p>

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<p>Sure, I can read it right now. Also don’t worry, as long as you can fit the essay on one page you should be fine.</p>

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<p>One page single-spaced, 2 page double is the general guideline. I’ll read it if you’d like</p>

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<p>Thanks guys! (Two should be enough.)</p>