<p>I need a quick response (if possible) with some critiques on my personal essay.</p>
<p>It's 499 words.</p>
<p>I'll PM it to you to read. Thanks.</p>
<p>ill read it</p>
<p>ok...ill see it</p>
<p>Send it on over</p>
<p>i wrote a reply, lemme know what you think of my commentary...i think the best thing a person can do for their essay is have outsiders read it, cause thats who the AdComm are...outsiders! you need to make sure its clear to complete strangers!</p>
<p>will help if you are interested. PM and i will try to see if it is what the gatekeepers actually want according to some books i read.</p>
<p>good luck</p>
<p>Jvowube: yes, thank you so much for your advice! it really helps a lot.</p>
<p>SweetestSith: thank you, as well! your grammar help is quite appreciated.</p>
<p>i would like to read your writing and give you some feedbacks</p>
<p>hit me with the essay</p>
<p>very nice essay. Good use of transitions. Great job.</p>
<p>Best of luck</p>
<p>pm it to me</p>
<p>PM me, I'll read</p>
<p>sure PM it to me</p>
<p>i'd be happy to give some feedback. PM me</p>
<p>pm mee.....</p>
<p>Ill read it and give feedback</p>
<p>i'll give it read pm me</p>
<p>I'll take a look and give you my input - pm me</p>