<p>. After a year in Amsterdam, the four kilometer high rural city -population 1000 farmers-,its twenty shop strong city-center (most of which were cobblers) and the fact that it took an overnight jeep ride to get to some place remotely civilized didnt do wonders for Shandurs allure to a thirteen year old.</p>
<p>Can anyone please untangle/fix his sentence.
I will owe you!
Thanks</p>
<p>Bumpp !!10char</p>
<p>Fix what? It is a complete mess and has to be entirely rewritten because you cannot even tell what it is really trying to say. Apparently it is trying to say the following:</p>
<p>Shandur is a small village that sits 4,000 kilometers above sea level, has a population of 1,000 consisting mostly of farmers, has a town center with only 20 shops consisting of mostly cobblers, and is an overnight jeep ride away from any any area that one would remotely consider “civilized.” The thirteen year old, who had lived a year in Amsterdam, was not impressed with the allure of Shandur.</p>
<p>Yes of course I know its a mess, that’s why I put it on here. Thank you for the redo!</p>
<p>I’m sorry but 4000 Km above sea level is sort of funny :D</p>