Quick read over Common App?

College Essays
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<p>Is anybody willing to give my Common App essay a quick read and give me some feedback?</p>

<p>And when I mean quick, I mean quick. I'm not looking for a complete editing job (unless you want to offer one, heh) just some remarks about my essay.</p>

<p>Thanks for all your time!</p>

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<p>I’ll read over yours if you read mine! PM me!</p>

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<p>BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUMPPP!!! (with gusto)</p>

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<p>I’m on a critique rampage. I’ll read yours if you want met to.</p>

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<p>BUMP!!! (this time with 3x the gusto)</p>