Quick Writing Question

<p>BB, pg. 686, #5</p>

<p>One result of the fire department's new contract is that they can no longer offer overtime pay on weekends.</p>

<p>Why is this wrong? The correct answer is:</p>

<p>*
As one result of its new contract, the fire department can no longer offer overtime pay on weekends.*</p>

<p>Thanks in advance</p>

<p>In the first sentence, who's "they"? The other answer choices that they gave you might have left the 'they' there or the other sentences were much worse than the correct answer.</p>

<p>^Agreed."They" is an indefinite pronoun (or at least I think that is what it is called).</p>

<p>Ah, I see. So "they" is ambiguous. That was kind of stupid, don't know why I didn't pick up on that.</p>