<p>I can understand why you choose no error, as people talk in a similar way to the way this sentence is written in daily life.</p>
<p>BUT it should be “before he SAW” (I think) to parallel “took…home for a visit”, not “imagining.”
The verb-ing is an acceptable way to talk about a process which took a period of time (imagining isn’t instantaneous, I guess) in the past.</p>
<p>I’m not sure about “before he WOULD SEE” because “WOULD pass before he WOULD see…” I think that’s redundancy.</p>
<p>Again, I’m not 100% sure - someone correct me or confirm</p>
<p>I’m pretty sure iit’s “seeing” because the subject is unclear. Who is “seeing” Derek again? Is it the “five years”? Is it “Dan”? Is it “quincy”? </p>
<p>Sorry if i sound like a jackass
There was a very similar problem in the new BB. Im thinking it was test #3? check it out.</p>