Rate/Critique my College Essay (FSU) Final Draft

<p>Private message me and I'll send it to you ASAP.</p>

<p>I'd like to start my other college essays so if you see ANYTHING that needs to be changed with this essay please note it!!</p>

<p>FSU hasn’t opened yet, has it?</p>

<p>Yes it is.</p>

<p>Anyone please?</p>