<p>I already sent my app but i m having a lot of second doubts. Since i m not yet brave enough to have someone critique a full essay. please look at my short-answer abt describing an extracurricular activity. i tried to make my whole app seem different from the norm but i might have come off as being too standoffish/jaded/mean....i really dont know. ppl think what they want to think and i cant do anythng abt it now.</p>
<p>I’ll read it for you.</p>
<p>ill read it…</p>
<p>i can read it for you.
actually you can make changes when you submit your CA to other colleges.</p>
<p>Yes, please PM it to me, and if you could, tell me the college you have in mind. I feel that the strength of the essay varies with what colleges an applicant is applying to.</p>