I’ll PM you just send me your email
Thanks in advance!! 
I am willing to read your essay. I, actually, am in the same application process. I think it would benefit both of us to exchange our essays and maybe suggest few tips to each other.
Just send me your essay and I will share you mine.
And happy holidays!
I would not share your essay with anyone except the experienced readers who say on the pinned thread that they will read essays. Anyone else, you run the risk that they will plagerize your essay.
I’d be happy to help too! Current Cornell student here.
uh how do i send a private message here? or do I just send my email?
@Heroash, feel free to PM it over! Duke alum and happy to take a look.
Cornell alum here, feel free to message
Penn alum here, and I’d echo what @intparent said about being extremely careful about sharing your essay to people that haven’t been verified - especially on an online forum.
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For what it’s worth, the only person up to here on this thread with more than 500 posts is the one who recommended that you not share your essay with anyone but an experienced poster.
Take her words to heart!!!