Rate my essay on common app prompt 1!

<p>Here is the prompt: Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.</p>

<p>I wrote an essay on this, and I'm aiming for the elite schools. If anyone would like to read and give commentary, I would be glad to do the same! Pm me</p>

<p>I’d be happy to take a look if you want to PM it to me.</p>

<p>pm’d</p>