Rate my essay?

I’m applying to selective schools, and I want to know how well my essay stacks up to other applicants
It’s only a draft so far and I’m still editing it, but would anyone be willing to read it and rate it from 1-10?

Don’t send your essay to anyone other the “Senior Members.”

And even that is not advisable.

Not even a senior member but ^^^

@STEM2017 thanks for the warning. I’ll be cautious about who I send them to

Always ask your teachers and friends for advice first.