<p>The Collegeboard's Official Online Study Guide WOULDN'T grade my essay (with their AI grading system). It said, "This essay appears to be off topic, written in a language other than English, inconsistent with the rules of English grammar, or is otherwise unfamiliar to the automated essay scoring service. You may submit another response."</p>
<p>So, I ask that College Confidential do it for me lol.</p>
<p>PROMPT: Something flawed is far more interesting than something perfect. Perfection is a trifle dull. It is not the least of lifes ironies that this, which we all aim at, is better not quite achieved.</p>
<p>Adapted from W. Somerset Maugham, The Summing Up</p>
<p>Is perfection something to be admired or sought after? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.</p>
<p>ESSAY:</p>
<p>The individual pursuit of perfection, with all of its agony included, is something that can be admired indeed. However, there are a myriad of other ways to pursue perfection in the most evil ways imaginable; these evil pursuits of perfection have one thing in common: a society, rather than an individual, backs them up. </p>
<p>Flash back thousands of years from now into the ancient Greek society of Spartacus, the belligerent city supposedly made up of "perfect" individuals whose only job is to both protect and aid Greece in its military endeavors. In Spartacus, the only breed of human allowed to live is the kind that is "perfect"; however, "perfect" is what is defined by the generations past. According to the city elders, a child who is born in this city has to be a certain height, be a certain weight, and even have a certain "look". Although a few of the infants in this magnificent city meet the impeccable standards of perfection, the great rest of the poor infants do not, and as a consequence, must be thrown to the wolves to the feed the giant, vicious beast that is societal-perfection. </p>
<p>Now flash forward thousands of years ahead to Hitlers Nazi Germany during the infamous Holocaust. With Adolph Hitler's criteria on what "societal-perfection" is, he and the Nazi Army kill millions of people in their maddening pursuit to help form an eventual Utopia: a people possessing German blood, blonde hair, and blue eyes. </p>
<p>Now flash forward to the present, where we stand looking at this question of whether we should "admire" or "sought after" perfection with a new perspective. In viewing societies that had differing perceptions of perfection, we realize that the definition of perfect is in fact questionable in itself. What made Hitler's definition of "perfect", forgive me for saying, perfect? Who determined what made a Spartan "perfect", other than a Spartan himself? It is the undeniable truth that what is "perfect" lies in the eyes of who ever you ask. What I think is perfect is not necessarily what you think is perfect, or what Hitler thinks is perfect, or what a Spartan thinks is perfect. Thus, I feel that as long as a society does not pursue its close-minded vision of perfection as a whole, but instead each of us pursues what perfection means to us as an individual, we will remain all well and good; the consequences of choosing the alternative path, as history has pointed out, can be devastating.</p>