<p>Hello</p>
<p>This is like the other thread, I'd like to send out my roommate essay to people with experience who can review it. It's a pretty casual essay but not sure if I got the tone right..</p>
<p>Hello</p>
<p>This is like the other thread, I'd like to send out my roommate essay to people with experience who can review it. It's a pretty casual essay but not sure if I got the tone right..</p>
<p>Send it over I’d be glad to help</p>
<p>PM me. (10 char)</p>
<p>Yep sure, PM me…</p>
<p>Sure thing; just send it over…</p>
<p>It would be interesting to read. PM me! :)</p>
<p>I’d be happy to look over it. Just PM me! :)</p>
<p>I will give you feedback.</p>
<p>Yup sure would love to help</p>
<p>would love to give some feedback</p>
<p>I’ll help you; PM me :D</p>
<p>I’ll read it if you want.</p>
<p>i will read</p>
<p>PM me Ill read it</p>