Rate my why penn essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Pennsylvania
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<p>Well, I submitted everything but I felt that my why penn essay was my weakest. Can someone read it to tell me what they think?</p>

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<p>You can PM it to me if you want.</p>

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<p>I’d be willing to help out, just PM me.</p>

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<p>sure :slight_smile: pm me</p>

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<p>I can read it! PM me :)</p>

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<p>I can read it too!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>Sent it to some people, will send it to more later. Let me know feedback on what you think and where I perhaps went wrong? Gah. Essays are soo subjective. They better not be looking for a single type of answer.</p>

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<p>you can PM it to me as well! (:</p>

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<p>Pm me!!!</p>

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<p>Please PM me as well!!!</p>

<p>Same, I just hope my Penn-specific essay is good but I don’t know!</p>

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<p>You can PM me! I’m also a Penn applicant.</p>

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<p>If you PM me yours, I’ll PM you mine, I’d like some feedback too, if you don’t mind.</p>

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<p>PM me, I’ll critique.</p>

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<p>PM me~I will critique it</p>

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<p>PM me. I will read</p>

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<p>send it over :)</p>

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<p>PM me; I’ll take a look!</p>

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<p>PM it to me =)</p>

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<p>pm me! i’ll critique</p>