<p>So yeah. I got deferred from my dream school, so I just re-wrote my CA, new prompt and everything. </p>
<p>At this moment, I think I need to develop a better idea in the essay. If you'd like to help, reply here or send over a PM. I'll PM my essay to you, so be sure your inbox isn't full.</p>
<p>(I am going to be picky in who I let read this, so if you don't have enough posts to PM or if you're currently applying to college, I'm probably not going to send over the essay for security reasons.)</p>
<p>Thanks a million!</p>