Read an essay for a transfer?

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<p>Hey everyone I was wondering if anyone would read my first draft of one of my Brown writing supplement essays?</p>

<p>I had a horrible GPA in high school, went to community college and should be applying with a 3.7-3.75 GPA so I REALLY need to hit these essays out of the park. </p>

<p>The essay is:</p>

<p>“Please tell us more about your interest in transferring. Why does Brown appeal to you as a college option? Who or what has influenced your decision to apply? (250 word limit)”</p>

<p>So if anyone is strong at writing essays and can proofread and give pointers or corrections to mine I would appreciate it so much!</p>

<p>I don’t want to post it here but I’ll message it to you if you’re down.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>Hey cccblues. My name is Maggie and I’m a reporter for The Brown Daily Herald. I was wondering if you’d be willing to be interviewed for an article I am writing. I’m trying to get opinions of various Brown applicants about why they’re applying and what attracted them to Brown. Email me at <a href=“mailto:margaret_livingstone@brown.edu”>margaret_livingstone@brown.edu</a> if you’re interested!</p>

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<p>You might find essay readers in the College Essay section. I read them sometimes, but I don’t do proofreading.</p>