Read an ivy applicants hopefully final draft?

College Essays
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<p>I’ll give you feed back.</p>

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<p>i’ll read it!</p>

43

<p>i’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I can read it. I already wrote my essays and don’t plan on changing them. I can even send my essay so you can critique it.</p>

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<p>I can read it as well, finished mine a couple weeks ago</p>