Read and comment on my SUBMITTED CommonApp Essay?

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<p>Hey! Just recently SUBMITTED my CommonApplication. Was wondering if people would be looking at the final version of my main CommonApp essay, in retrospect. Hopefully it came out exactly as I, and many personal editors, hoped!</p>

<p>Let me know and i'll PM it to you!</p>

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<p>pm me if you will. Thanks. o yea tell me which topic choice you picked on commonapp thanks.</p>