Read and critique my Common App essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hey there! I wrote my essay on the "childhood to adulthood" prompt, and I'd love some critique so that I can improve it. Fair warning, I started this essay today and finished it today, so it's a very rough draft and certainly not my best.</p>

<p>Thank you very much!</p>

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<p>I can read it, just PM me!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

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<p>Sure pm me</p>

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<p>I can read it.</p>

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<p>Just PM me. I love to read it</p>

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<p>i’ll read it</p>

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<p>Hey, I can help edit your college essay!</p>

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<p>I’ll help! DM</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look. I’m a great proofreader. I’m critiquing and editing many right now so it might take a little while but I’d love to help.</p>

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<p>Love to help, please PM!: )</p>

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<p>I can read it, pm me :)</p>

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<p>I can read it if you want. Just PM me!</p>