Read and critique my essay please :)

[cardamine]

<p>Hello,</p>

<p>I am looking for a person who is good at editing and most importantly giving feedback :)</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

[suruzhe]

<p>meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee</p>

[dangosan]

<p>I can help! I’m all done with mine!</p>