read CommonApp one?

College Essays
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<p>it's sorta of only a rough draft but basically my life with random funny and interesting things. I want my conclusion be really really good too.</p>

<p>Please critique I knows it's still ROUGHly organized, simple vocabulary, etc. etc.</p>

<p>anyone?</p>

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<p>I’ll give it a go.</p>

3

<p>bump???</p>

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<p>i’ll take a look at it!</p>