Read/Critique Common App Essay?

College Essays
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<p>Title is pretty self explanatory. If anyone has the time, the help would be greatly appreciated.</p>

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<p>I would love to:) PM me.</p>

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<p>Thank you.</p>

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<p>15 posts needed.</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll help you out!</p>

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<p>sorry working on it</p>

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<p>PM right over :)</p>

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<p>I will read it and give u advice. PM me.</p>