Read my admission essay please (desperately)

College Essays
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<p>Hi fellows!</p>

<p>I have just finished my essay. I have to submit it before monday.</p>

<p>Would be somebody so kind as to read my essay and offer criticism? If yes, please send me a Personal Message and I will send you the essay!</p>

<p>Thank you very much!
Gery</p>

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<p>i'll read it <a href="mailto:goankit@yahoo.com">goankit@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>go ahead and send it over</p>

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<p>Sure!
<a href="mailto:apexeffect@gmail.com">apexeffect@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>Warning...i'm a harsh grader</p>