read my AMAZINGLY bad essay!!(i need help!!)

College Essays
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<p>i need someone to critic it!!!i think it's kinda boring. how do i put more feeling into it? lemme know if you want it PM'ed.</p>

<p><strong><em>i will check your post history very carefully to make sure you are not trying to steal it or something</em></strong><strong><em>i will check to see if your post have been insightful to others and that your a good person</em></strong>**</p>

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<p>..er... I'll read it and try my best to help if you want me to. pm me...</p>

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<p>I'll do what I can, if you'd like. (And I already have my big essay finished, so you really don't need to worry at all about pming me)</p>

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<p>PM me; I'd like to help</p>

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<p>I'd like to help.</p>

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<p>pm me! i'll help</p>

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<p>i pm'd u cj</p>

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<p>pm me, ill try my best</p>