<p>I had no ideas as to what I would write my essay about so I wrote about something random. Its not your typical narrative. It seems original to me but at the same time I feel that admissions officers might not like it? Anyone willing to give me some feedback?</p>
<p>If you are looking for the opinion of a second reader, I would be glad to give you an honest feedback.
I am also an applicant this time but I am all done with my essays. If you are fine with that, then feel free to pm me your essay.</p>