<p>I just finished my second essay for the Bard application and was wondering if anyone wouldn't mind reading it and giving me some feedback. The question is </p>
<p>In the wake of the wars in Iraq and Afghanistan, the possibility of requiring universal military service through a draft has
once again come under consideration. Write an essay arguing your position, for or against the draft. Your argument may
or may not include a discussion of a system of national service that extends beyond military service. Please note, this is
not a litmus test regarding political views; Bard seeks diversity and originality, not conformism.</p>
<p>Thanks a bunch guys!</p>