read my 'between living and dreaming" essay please

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Chicago ✅
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<p>I just finished this today and would like to have some constructive criticism of it. I realize it's not perfect and I will edit it many times before the nov 1st deadline.</p>

<p>Oh yeah, I would prefer alumni and college students but high school students are fine too
Thanks!</p>

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<p>sure, pm me :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! (:</p>

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<p>ill read it!</p>

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<p>PM ! I love reading essays :)</p>

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<p>i’ve decided not to send out my essay anymore because i fear it might get stolen.</p>