Read my College Essay?

I’m really interested in someone who can read my college essay, please be critical and if you’re interested comment below.

Make sure only to send your essay to a trusted longtime poster. And NEVER post the entire essay anywhere on this forum or any other. Once you post it, its public property. Good luck!

I’m interested if you’re still looking. PM me if so!

I’ll have a look if you’d like.

^dont do it

As @STEM2017 said, you want “trusted long time posters”-- adults, not kids, with more than ONE solitary post. Preferably ones with a good handle on word usage as well as experience in college essays.

As an FYI, the original post # 3 has been deleted. It was a brand new poster with usage issues.
That was the reason for STEM2017’s response.