Read my Common App and Why UPenn essays?

College Essays
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<p>i'm doing Early Decision for UPenn and want to know what you guys think of my essays. they are pretty much in their final form--i want to know what you think i could/should change before i submit it. </p>

<p>comment and i will PM you.</p>

<p>thanks!</p>

<p>btw, UPenn is extending the ED deadline to Nov. 4th b/c of the recent power outage.</p>

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<p>I’ll read them over if you want!</p>

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<p>Sure, send them to me :D</p>

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<p>sent you both copies. please either PM me feedback or post here. thanks!!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look at the essays. Just let me know if you prefer your comments here or in PM</p>

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<p>Sure thing. PM me and I’ll give you feedback. I am very familiar w/ what Penn is looking for, as was considering Penn ED.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I can take a look!</p>

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<p>I’ll critique/edit it! Just have it pm-ed to me.</p>

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<p>i’ll read it</p>

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<p>Sure, happy to read. PM me ,please.</p>