read my common app essay... honest opinion needed

Applying to College
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<p>Is the topic too risky.. or good personal statement?</p>

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<p>Send it over.</p>

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<p>i can take a look</p>

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<p>Okay, send it to me too. What kind of review are you looking for: general opinions on whether the topic is acceptable, specific comments on sections of the essay, or proofreading?</p>

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<p>feel free to PM it to me</p>

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<p>your read mine, ill read yours</p>

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<p>i'll read it too...im fresh off editing World Lit essays for IB so my editing gene is going 20934820934 mph.</p>

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<p>send, ill read</p>

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<p>yeah ill read too</p>

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<p>pm me! im good at grammar...</p>

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<p>PM it to me;)</p>

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<p>PM me! I'll read it. ~</p>