<p>I've recently written a rough draft of my college essay and when I keep on rereading it, it seems off to me but I just don't know where it should be fixed.. I also like hearing constructive criticism from others to see an outside point of view, so if anyone is free please this would mean a lot to me!</p>
<p>The essay topic is: “Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story. (250-650)”</p>
<p>Ill PM if you’re willing to read it!</p>
<p>No No No. You dont post ur essay online like this. If u can, please delete this thread. U tell people to comment and then PM ur essay to select people. U dont post it in ur thread for the universe to see</p>
<p>Wow I’m such a newbie… Thank you for letting me know @muhammad</p>
<p>i will read and critique, just pm me</p>
<p>Ill read your essay. PM it to me</p>
<p>Thank you antwanmon and htwnscholar I PM my essay to both of you</p>
<p>I’d be happy to help you! I have extensive experience as a tutor and essay editor, so hopefully I can be a boon to you :)</p>
<p>PM me and I’ll give you my email address so you can send it to me via email.</p>
<p>PM me 
I’d love to read it.</p>
<p>Send it to me and I’ll read it!</p>
<p>PM me and I will give ur feedback soon</p>
<p>You can pm it to me too.</p>
<p>PM me! I would love to read it</p>
<p>I can also read it for you if you like!</p>
<p>Awe thanks guys! Right now I’m in the middle of editing the old one so once I’m done ill make sure to PM it to all of you! Thanks</p>
<p>pm me and ill read it!</p>
<p>I can read it too if you’d like?</p>
<p>I’ll read it if u can PM me :)</p>
<p>I’ll read it. PM me!</p>