Read my Common App Essay, please?

<p>I have a draft of my common app essay and I was wondering if someone could read it and give suggestions on content and grammar. I know the ending is not great, that's the part im working on...Just let me know and I'll PM you, thank you!!</p>

<p>bump bump bump</p>

<p>if someone offers to read my essay, I promise I’ll read theirs :slight_smile: </p>

<p>and harsh criticism is accepted</p>

<p>Sure. PM it over</p>

<p>I’ll read it! Already wrote mine and sent it, so I have no motivation to steal it, lol.</p>

<p>I’ll gladly read it :D</p>

<p>^^thanks everyone</p>

<p>I’ll read, I’m a mom and really enjoying working with all you applicants!</p>