<p>I had to cut it down after I saw that they're limiting us to 500 words now. I'll PM it to anyone who can offer me some critiques. It's about a fairly unique topic, I'd say: my walking habit. Trying to make it not clich</p>
<p>I’ll read it just pm it over and I’ll give you feedback within a day. You can also send questions or specific things you are worried about to help me focus my critique if you wish.</p>
<p>Oh, I only want graduated seniors and adults to read it. Can’t trust anyone these days! But thanks.</p>
<p>You can PM my stepbrother. He is in second year at Harvard. PM me for his email.</p>
<p>Anyone else?</p>
<p>i’ll read it and give you my honest opinion :D</p>
<p>I’m not an adult though</p>
<p>I want to read it and give helpful comments</p>
<p>Okay, anyone with a post count not in the single digits? Jeez. Not trying to get ripped off here.</p>
<p>I would be happy to read it.</p>
<p>I have three digits in my post count.</p>
<p>Yes, but from what I can tell, you’re not a graduated senior or an adult. I don’t want to be plagiarized.</p>
<p>^Oh my bad. Is that the criteria? Nvm then. This is one of my first times posting on this subsection.</p>
<p>I would love to read it…just PM me.</p>
<p>ill read as long as you’re okay with me being blunt about advice :P</p>
<p>Sure, just PM me.</p>
<p>I’ll take a crack at it… I’m still in high school, but I won’t steal your essay, scout’s honor. I’m almost an eagle scout too. And in Order of the Arrow, scouting’s national honor society. So I think I can be trusted. As far as credentials: Honors American Lit. teacher praises my writing as worthy of cloning, I rewrote an Indian kid’s letter that saved him from getting rescinded from UC Davis, and yesterday I helped someone else out with his common app essay, apparently I was the only one who’s suggestions were worth taking. Your essay’s safe with me.</p>
<p>Though I’m a highschooler, I’m a 3 digit poster.</p>
<p>I’ll trade essays (Mine’s still in first draft). Quid pro quo and all that. Take it as insurance.</p>
<p>PM it over to me and I’ll read it :)</p>
<p>I would love to read it and give informative feedback</p>