read my common app essay..

<p>I made huge revisions on my original. Please give an honest opinion and comment.</p>

<p>yeah... PM me</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>PM me, i''ll read it.!</p>

<p>i ll read it
PM me</p>

<p>Sure, I'd love to. Give it a PM.</p>

<p>i'll read it as well</p>