Read my Common App Essay?

College Essays
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<p>Anybody want to read my Common App essay? The feedback I've collected from friends, family, and teachers have been rather mixed; some love it and others hate it, so I'd like to collect more opinions if possible.</p>

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<p>send it to me</p>

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<p>Not to be offensive, but I’d rather only PM people who have joined for a while and have decent post counts. Not that I think you’re automatically suspicious due to low post count, but I’d like to keep this as secure as possible.</p>

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<p>lol pm me if you want me to give opinions. Promise it’ll be secure haha.</p>

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<p>PM’d you 10char</p>

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<p>Bumped 10char</p>

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<p>sure, PM me</p>