<p>I would love any opinions/criticism on my common app essay! </p>
<p>Topic "Evaluates a significant experience and it's impact on you" 490 words.</p>
<p>Applying to NYU, USC, U of Miami </p>
<p>Warning: It relates to a family health issue. From experience, I know a lot of people who don't like hearing about people's health/sensitive issues so I'm just giving you a heads up if you're that type of person. </p>
<p>Thanks!! <3</p>