Read my common app essay?

College Essays
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<p>I posted this thread a few weeks ago and a good number of people responded but didn't actually give me feedback when I sent them my essays. </p>

<p>I would really like it if you guys could read my essay and help me make it better. </p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

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<p>Sure, I would be open to.</p>

<p>PM me</p>

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<p>PM me :slight_smile: I will read/critique.</p>

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<p>Sure I will read and give advice. PM me.</p>

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<p>PM me, I’ll take a look</p>

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<p>I’d be honored to read your essay! Just PM and I’ll respond ASAP :)</p>

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<p>PM me your essay and I would love to read it! Ill respond before tomorrow.</p>

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<p>Hey lsky17, it looks like you’ve got a decent number of takers, but feel free to contact me if you need any more help.
I’m an editorial intern at The Prospect (as well as a Senior) so I’ll mostly focus on syntax and grammatical nitpickings, but I’ll try to help you develop thematically.</p>

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<p>sure just pm me!</p>

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<p>Would you like to swap essays? If so, PM me your email address so I can send mine.</p>

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<p>Pm me. Btw I am a literary genius</p>

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<p>Yes! pm me! Would love to help</p>