<p>I've been revising my CA essay, and I'm scared that I'm losing my authentic voice in it. I'm not quite sure whether I like the new draft or not, so it would be great to have some experienced essay readers critique it. It's on the first prompt.</p>
<p>^^^I also need this help!</p>
<p>bumpppp. anyone?</p>
<p>I’m not that experienced, but I could read it. I’m also writing my common app essay, maybe you can read it back when I’m done. I can’t answer your pm, so please include your mail account.</p>
<p>i would like to try to read it.</p>