If anyone would like to read my common app essay I would really appreciate the feedback. Thanks!
Sure, message me. I’d love to help, if you help me with mine too.
@AnirudhMeminath ok i still gotta make a few changes but i will make sure to send it to u when im finished. Also for further reference, this is the essay(assuming i don’t drastically change it) that I would be using to try and get into UPenn ED so base your degree of criticism off what you think a school like penn would scrutinize. Any constructive criticism is appreciated though. I will send it likely sometime in the next week. Thanks!
I can try reading it too, if you want another eye. I might ask you to return the favor once I decide to start mine (because I’m also going to be starting mine soon, but I’ve been procrastinating 
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I can help too!
Do you still need someone to read your essay because I would love to!
I have some friends that got into Penn so I know what they are looking for! PM me your essay for some honest feedback!!
I need help with mine too! :)]
I’d love to read your essay
Anyone want to read my essay?
ill read your essay hoping you can return the favor eventually
I would love to help as well. PM me ur essay. I am doing Penn ED as well
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I would love to read your essay! PM me when you find time.
I would love to read it too! Pm me if you’d like.