Hi! In desperate need of a few sets of fresh eyes willing to read my common app essay. Please help! If you read mine I surely will read yours and help too 
I would like to help! PM me!
I’ll read it if you PM me.
I’ll read it too if you want. PM me!
Ill read it!
Are you a high school student?
I’ll read it, PM me!
Yes i am, but im already done with all my essays— maybe we can exchange and give eachother feedback