Read my common app essay?

<p>I wrote a very rough draft of my common app essay, and i could use some people to critique it.</p>

<p>i will critique it...pm me</p>

<p>I will, too, if you want another opinion. :)</p>

<p>I'll critique it if you want, I've got the time.</p>

<p>You can PM it to me.</p>

<p>Sure. PM it. =]</p>