Read my Common App extracurricular (short) essay: I walked out of the subway...

College Essays
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<p>Please comment and critique my short essay for the Common App 1000 character extracurricular essay. It was hard to choose one of the many activities I had and fit it into ~150 words. I'm applying to Tier 1 schools so it has to be good. This is my first draft though.</p>

<p>Gah I'm dumb. I guess I'm supposed to PM it to people.</p>

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<p>Pm away…</p>

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<p>Pm me, I’ll be happy to give suggestions</p>

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<p>Ill take a look :)</p>

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<p>will anyone be willing to please read my college essay? :)</p>

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<p>Sure I will take a look</p>

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<p>Pm me! :slight_smile: I may help you out!</p>

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<p>I will help as well!</p>

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<p>Thank you, pm sent</p>

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<p>If you still need another eye, I’ll be happy to look it over.</p>

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<p>you can pm me. :)</p>

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<p>PM me I’ll read it for you</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! PM me~</p>