Read my Common app Main essay on Diversity

College Essays
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<p>Can anyone give me some feedback on my common app main essay? I chose the 5th prompt, the one on diversity.</p>

<p>I'm applying to Vanderbilt and Boston College.</p>

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<p>sure
pm me</p>

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<p>PM me too.</p>

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<p>thanks guys. anyone else want to read?</p>

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<p>Sure, I'll take a look. PM it to me.</p>

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<p>ill read it. pm it over</p>

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<p>I wrote one on diversity too! PM me</p>

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<p>PM me. Can you help edit mine as well? It's an open topic.</p>

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<p>sure, pm me</p>

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<p>Haha I did mine on diversity too...PM me</p>

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<p>I'll read it, pm me.</p>

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<p>I wrote one on diversity too--PM it over!</p>

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<p>i will read it. email me. <a href="mailto:tyac.sg@gmail.com">tyac.sg@gmail.com</a></p>