<p>could someone please read over my short answer for the common app? i don't think it would matter if i posted it on here.. but just to be safe, i'll pm it to you (:</p>
<p>here's the prompt: In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience) (150 words or fewer).</p>
<p>i really just need to know if i'm on the right track. but truly, ANY kind of feedback would be really helpful.. so if you think you can help, please let me know! it would be forever appreciated!</p>